Outlines of possible treatments

When thinking of ideas for our video we came up with many suggestions that were rejected;

For example we didn't create a live performance due to the budget we were given, and the look they were going for would have been quite hard to create. So we decided to make the video a lot more story lined and put emphasis on the artist and her personal life, that way people can relate to her and by the end of the video like her.

We also didn't put the beach idea in because as a group we thought that the artist didn't look great being windswept on the beach considering it's in February. However we replaced this scene with scene where she is packing all her stuff ready to leave her boyfriend, it seems very tense and works well.

Furthermore we also decided to reduce the amount of friends she has in the video to one, because this way her life becomes a lot more personal and we as an audience feel more privileged to be able to see whats happening. With anymore friends around her it would have looked like a fun day out not a discussion about her break up.